viernes, 25 de octubre de 2013

writing assignment practice

Cooking

Identify and describe a favorite activity or interest and provide at least four reasons why this activity or interest holds your attention and/or is enjoyable to you.
Topic #3 
  1. Inventing
  2. Organizing
  3. Drafting
  4. Revising
  5. Editing

Inventing

I enjoy eating - cooking is a way to taste new things
I enjoy cooking for others and the recognition that comes from cooking enjoyable food for others
it's a way of expressing my love and care for someone
eating a meal is social time and time to be spent with love ones
a meal can reflect a person's culture and country
it focuses my mind on an activity that involves my concentration - forces me to keep focused
your food is effected by your emotions
there is a clear result at the end of the process


organizing

  • Topic - cooking
  • Topic sentence - Cooking is my favorite way of spending freetime in my home; it is beneficial for my health, wellbeing and strengthening relationships.
  • Supporting Points
    • Specific example - After a long day at work there's no better way to unwind like cooking a meal for loved one. 
    • Explanation - The process of cooking is a great way to relax. Following a recipe requires focusing the mind, taking thoughts away from the days problems to concentrate on preparing a meal.
    • I enjoy eating. There us nothing like homecooked food. I love trying new types of food from different parts of the world. I could not afford to eat out at the time. 

    • Specific example.  To prepare a meal with love for someone is the way I express my my love for someone, be it a partner, friends or family.
      • Explanation - The cooking process involves our emotions. People often argue that their mom's cooking is the best, and it may well be to that person because the food has been prepared with love by the parent.  that with how your mom's homecooked food tastes? Is it because the have the best ever recipe for spag bol or that it was made lovingly for the family.
      Specific Example  - I bring people together with the food I prepare.
      • Explanation - It is common that I don't cook elaborate meals when preparing food for myself. What makes a meal special is people coming together to share the food, enjoy one another's company and spend time together over the dinner table.
      • Specific Example - I can learn about a different culture through trying their recipes.
  • Concluding Sentence Therefore next time you are about to suggest to go out for a meal, you should go pick up a recipe book.

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